Evidence: Film Script Excerpt


YOKNAPATAWPHA COUNTY SHERIFF'S DEPARTMENT

Investigating Officer(s): Det. S. Murphy, Det. T. Armstrong
Incident No.: 002221-15H-2004
Case Description: Corwin Fitz Homicide

This is the opening scene of Fitz's movie, Bacchanals' Destruction, taken as evidence (Evidence # 002221-03) from the master bedroom of the film crew's lodge.

Caution: Rough language and situations.


EXT--LONESOME COUNTRY ROAD, DAY

It's a swarthy afternoon down South. Traveling this stretch, one is likely to encounter various forms of dilapidation. The world is vast and falling. At one particularly lonesome stretch, BEECH, a young black hitchhiker, is resting in the partial shade of a road sign. A nuts-and-bolts economy car rattles down the road and passes him, then slows to a stop and backs up.

Two men are in the car. The passenger, KENNY, is middle-aged and road-whipped, or so it seems. He has a couple of day's worth of stubble, and his business attire looks worn from routine. The driver, RALDLER, is in his early twenties; he looks as if he were held at gunpoint and made to comb his ratty hair and change his clothes, but still refused to shave.

Kenny rolls down the window...

KENNY
(to BEECH)

Ain't gonna get too far sittin' on your knees, boy.

BEECH

What can I say? Traffic's slow today, and the sun's 'bout to eat me alive.

KENNY

Damn right it is. Where ya headed?

BEECH

Jackson.

KENNY

Jackson? That's a helluva stretch. What's a matter, your daddy beatin' on ya?

BEECH

Naw, I don't reckon he is.

KENNY

Well, ain't you lucky. Get in.

BEECH climbs in the backseat and the little economy car sputters off into the haze.

 

CUT TO:

INT--CAR, SAME

KENNY

You seem like a trusting fella. Most people these days wouldn't get in a car with a couple of rogues like us.

BEECH

Most white folks 'round here wouldn't stop to give me a ride either.

KENNY

Yeah, well, white or black, all people are bull****, you hear me?

Everyone is silent, only the blues on the radio and the road noise are heard.

KENNY
(cutting off radio)

Turn this s*** off. I wanna talk to our new friend here. What's your name?

BEECH

Beech.

KENNY

Beech?

BEECH

That's right.

KENNY

Well... Beech. You in trouble or somethin', I mean, why you scramblin' through the Delta on a day hot as this? You lookin' to become roadkill?

The car swerves. Raldler looks tense behind the wheel.

KENNY

S***, boy!

RALDLER

Sorry. Armadillo.

KENNY

Rather a dead armadillo than whiplash, ain't that right, Beech? Now, why was it you're out here wearing holes in your shoes?

BEECH

I'm just tryin' to start over. I done been in all the trouble I care to be in, so I'm goin' somewhere where it might not can find me.

KENNY

You can't hide from trouble. And that'll be the first thing you learn out here on the mean highway. Trouble is a slick bastard. Just ask my boy. Trouble is sho nuff gonna find his little prancin' ass. You know, Beech, some people have to die before they wake up.

Raldler bobbles the wheel again. Kenny screws up his face in disgust.

KENNY

I smell s***. Beech, did you s*** yourself, boy?

BEECH

No.

KENNY

No, I think you s*** yourself for fear of this knucklehead's driving.

(to Raldler)

Why don't you pull over someplace and let somebody drive who ain't gonna get us killed. And that would be me!

Raldler shoots Beech a worried look in the rearview mirror, then pulls the car to the shoulder. Kenny gets out and Raldler slides over into the passenger seat.

RALDLER
(on the sly, to Beech)

You picked the wrong day to go to Jackson, friend. Or the wrong car to get in one. You and me both are f****d. This guy's lost his marbles.

BEECH

Oh s***. You don't know him?

RALDLER

S*** no, man. I just started working with him today, and he's already pulled a gun on me.

BEECH

Oh s***.

RALDLER

You ain't packin' are you?

BEECH

Naw, man.

RALDLER

Well, then... Just let me handle this.

Kenny gets in. The awkward silence hangs heavy.

KENNY

What are y'all f**** sayin'?

RALDLER

Nothin' man, just--

BEECH

I was just tellin' him that I can get out right here, it'd be cool--

Kenny pulls off quickly, before Beech can get to the door.

KENNY

What's a matter, Beech? You feelin' sick back there?

BEECH

Kinda.

KENNY

Well, maybe you need to see a doctor or somethin'.

BEECH

Maybe, yeah.

KENNY

Yeah? Well, you know, I'm a doctor.

BEECH

You don't say...

KENNY
(angry)

I just f*****' did say, didn't I! Goddamn, you f*****' kids are so cynical these days. Like the world is some kinda game. How old are you, Beech?

BEECH

Twenty-three.

KENNY

Twenty-three years old. You know, when I was 23, I had a job and earned enough money to buy a car. I didn't hang out on the side of the road with one thumb in the wind and the other stuck up my ***, Beech. I didn't rely on other people's charity to get me where I wanted to go. You hearin' me?

The car is silent, dangerous.

RALDLER

Hey, man, maybe you should just let him out. I'm sure there's a gas station or somethin' right up--

Raldler is interrupted by a pistol report. Kenny has just pulled a gun and shot Raldler in the chest. Blood sprays the windshield, and Raldler lies lifeless.

BEECH
(whispering)

Oh s***.

Beech whimpers, trying not to ruffle any more feathers.

KENNY
(to Raldler)

Don't ever talk back to your elders, hot shot! I guess you blew it! Ha, ha, ha....

Kenny seems as if his tension has been released by this act. He lights a cigarette and basks in the highway wind.

KENNY

You know what this means?

BEECH
(in tears)

Wh- what's that?

KENNY

You're gonna have to help me carry out my plan. You see, my kid, he's been runnin' around tellin' his ma and his principal and all kinda folks that I been beatin' and molestin' him, you know what I'm sayin'.

BEECH
(feeble)

Uh-huh.

KENNY

Truth be told, it's him and his friends that's molestin' each other. I seen it, Beech. Walked up in the middle of the s***. So I'm goin' down to the old school house and takin' him down, along with all his f***** friends. There's so many of them squirmin' f***** that it'll take two men to do the job. You hear me?

Beech can't even squeeze out a response, he's so jolted.

KENNY

This kid here ain't got the heart for it.

(Bursts into laughter)

Kenny looks at Beech in the rearview mirror.

KENNY
(menacing)

What the f***'s the matter with you?

Beech can't respond.

KENNY

You with me or what?

 

CUT TO:

EXT--ROADSIDE, SAME

Kenny whips the car to the shoulder and gets out. He jerks Beech out of the backseat and sticks the gun in his face.

KENNY

You ain't tellin' me you're a softy too, are you? C'mon, man, you said you know trouble. Hell, man, if this ain't it...

BEECH
(babbling)

What are you doin', man?

KENNY

You think I'm a maniac? Well, maybe I am. But it's people like you made me that way! Now, you wanna die in this cotton patch here, or you wanna end it right now?

Kenny hands Beech the gun and backs off.

KENNY

C'mon, kid! Shoot me! C'mon, trouble man!

Beech twitches with fear as Kenny taunts him. Beech raises the gun. Kenny charges and Beech fires. Kenny's chest explodes and he falls to the dirty highway, rolling in a fit of spasms. Finally he gives and lies still as Beech reels in horror, his face glistening with tears. Beech surveys the scene, then checks the road. He wipes the gun with his shirt, throws it on the ground, and runs into the woods.

The murder scene is still as Beech vanishes in the thicket. Suddenly, Kenny raises his head to look for his killer. He grins and stands up, then begin to laugh. Inside the car, a bloody Raldler raises up and looks out the window, then laughs.

 

CUT TO:

EXT--ROAD, LATER

A bottle smashes against a road sign.

INT--CAR, SAME

The music is blaring, the car is speeding and the passengers are still covered in what appears to be blood. Raldler is half leaning out the window from his bottle toss.

RALDLER

Woo! s***, man, that's a rush!

KENNY

The thrill of a good performance. We just give that boy some damn fine entertainment, and it didn't cost him nothin', except a little wear on his wits. But he'll be alright in ... oh, I don't know. Thirty years maybe.

(Laughs)

RALDLER

You're the maestro, Kenny! You had me scared.

KENNY

Well, that's the thing. You adapt yourself to that mindset. If you ain't got it in ya, you can't pull it off. It's just like that kid. He becomes a performer too.

RALDLER

Unwilling, maybe, but...

KENNY

But who willingly comes to the world stage, Raldler? Who decides what roles they play?

RALDLER
(laughs)

Us.

KENNY

It's funny what a man can see and hear in a matter of minutes that'll turn him from a regular old hitchhiker into a cold-blooded killer.