Evidence: Film Script Excerpt # 3


YOKNAPATAWPHA COUNTY SHERIFF'S DEPARTMENT

Investigating Officer(s): Det. S. Murphy, Det. T. Armstrong
Incident No.: 002221-15H-2004
Case Description: Corwin Fitz Homicide

This scene comes from the script Fitz's movie, Bacchanals' Destruction, taken as evidence (Evidence # 002221-03) from the master bedroom of the film crew's lodge.

Caution: Rough language and situations.


BACCHANALS' DESTRUCTION script, Lodge Draft 8, pg. 16.

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INT -- LODGE BATHROOM, NIGHT

RALDLER is handcuffed to the faucet in the shower, thrashing about in the water, his hands and face streaming with blood. He rises from beneath the water, gasping for air. CHEYNE sits nervously on the comode.

RALDLER

Jesus! Sleepwalking. I had... a terrible nightmare. I dreamed that I died, but my spirit wouldn't rise. I was abandoned on earth, and what few spirits were here would have nothing to do with me. And somehow I could communicate with mortals, but they took no interest in me. And then I realized I was in hell. And there indeed was no salvation, for God had forsaken me. Worse than that, he'd forgotten about me, completely. It was the only way hell could exist. And the only devil was me, and the flames that consumed me were desperation.

CHEYNE

You've been beaten badly...

RALDLER

I'm dying? Do you think so?

CHEYNE

You're not dying, Raldler.

RALDLER

I'm not scared. I know that's not the way it is. Because I've lived other lives. In fact, in my last life, I died young in a car crash. I feel it every time I get behind the wheel. And I can feel what my next life will be. I'm gonna be an astronaut. I'll make God notice me this time... get right up there in his face and yell, "Look at me, you sweet, wonderful bastard!"

CHEYNE

Raldler--

RALDLER

Are you the angel come to get me? ...

CHEYNE

I want to get you out of here.

RALDLER

My situation has become rather complicated. I don't know these people like I once thought I did.

(long pause)

So... do you have a plan?

CHEYNE

This is too surreal for a plan.

RALDLER

There's gotta be a plan. Otherwise, what's there to fail?

CHEYNE

The plan is this. We climb out the window, we run like hell for the reservoir.

RALDLER

That's a perfectly terrible plan. I'm chained, for Christ's sake...

CHEYNE

Well, break the goddamn faucet off. Don't just lay there in the wet.

RALDLER

What made you decide to save me?

CHEYNE

Maybe it's what you told me in the kitchen. Maybe I see my fate somehow intertwined with yours.

RALDLER

You sad, poor, savage creature. Good-night...

He struts up and down the terrace in a drunken-like stupor, peeping in windows and knocking on doors as he yells and drinks. An occasional frightened eye looks out through partially closed curtains.

RALDLER disappears under the water. For nearly two minutes of uninterrupted screen time, RALDLER lays under the water as CHEYNE watches with a straight face. Finally she grabs him up.

RALDLER

They dragged the lake, you know?

CHEYNE

What?

RALDLER

They dragged it ... to look for my brother.

CHEYNE

Dammit, I'm tryin' to save you!

RALDLER

Didn't find nothin', of course. He put one right in the temple himself, did it right down by a creek near my house, then he slipped away under quicksand.

CHEYNE
(pleading)

We're both in this!

RALDLER

The only thing I remember is the funeral director. This f*****' slimeball was doing magic tricks, trying to cheer me up, while my brother is in the other room with a hole in his head, his body bloated and rotting. And this guy wants to be a f****** comedian. I pissed in his coffee mug, you know. And then we toasted my other brother, who saved himself too. Overdose. No question of intent.

CHEYNE

You're not beat yet.

RALDLER

Those weasels. I admire the hell out of 'em. I've thought of bailing out myself. Many a times... after a good performance. Take a bow, stick a gun in my mouth and shower the audience with gray matter. Share my knowledge with them.

CHEYNE

What's stopping you?

RALDLER

It's the only thing I'm truly scared of.